Task 2: In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? and is it positive or negative development?
Phân tích đề:
– Yêu cầu của câu hỏi:
Câu hỏi đưa ra 2 phần.
Phần 1 là WHY DOES THIS HAPPEN => Chúng ta cần đưa ra REASONS trong body 1.
Phần 2 là 1 dạng câu hỏi IS THIS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPEMT => Chúng ta có thể chọn 1 xu hướng (hoặc positive hoặc negative) để phân tích trong body 2
– Brainstorm ý chính:
1. REASONS: 1.1 Nhu cầu cần thu nhập cao hơn 1.2 Khối lượng công việc ngày càng nhiều/ Quá nhiều việc phải làm
2. MẶT NEGATIVES:
2.1 (Nghĩ về topic HEALTH) Ảnh hưởng xấu đến sức khoẻ
2.2 (Nghĩ về topic FAMILY) Ít thời gian dành cho gia đình
HỌC NGAY TỪ VỰNG LIÊN QUAN ĐẾN CHỦ ĐỀ WORK-LIFE BALANCE:
centers on : (verb) xung quanh việc gì
base salary: lương cơ bản
work extra hours= overtime = spend extra hours at work: làm thêm giờ
maintain a decent standard of living: duy trì mức sống tốt
increased workload: khối lượng công việc nhiều
Regular work hours : giờ làm việc bình thường
a peak season: mùa cao điểm
a new product launch: ra mắt sản phẩm mới
sales campaigns: chiến dịch giảm giá
overtime seems inevitable/ unavoidable: làm thêm giờ là không thể tránh khỏi
damage employees’ health: ảnh hưởng xấu đến sức khoẻ
negative youth development: sự phát triển tiêu cực cho trẻ
poor family fitness: sức khoẻ cả gia đình kém
lack of family communication and trust: không có sự giao tiếp và tin tưởng trong gia đình
have detrimental impacts: ảnh hưởng xấu
BÀI MẪU:
It is increasingly common for people to spend the majority of their day at workplaces. This essay will explore several possible reasons behind this trend and explain why it will have adverse effects on employees themselves. Considering firstly the reasons, one of the most obvious is the need for higher income. Working parents, for example, need to work extra hours to get more money than just their base salary to afford their children’s tuition fees, and maintain a decent standard of living for the whole family. Another most common reason is the increased workload. Regular work hours might not be enough for employees to finish every task they are assigned within a day, especially in a peak season like a new product launch or sales campaign when overtime seems inevitable/ unavoidable. Working too hard can present many problems, the most significant is that it can damage employees’ health. If we spend too many hours at our job, it is more likely that we would have no time and energy left to take proper care of ourselves. For example, we could not find the time to take part in outdoor activities, maintain a balanced diet that fuel our body, or get enough sleep. As a result, overtime can cause chronic stress, burnout, and depression. Another key impact of long-hours work on the family is the lack of family quality time. Many working parents could spend very little time with their children, thus contributing to negative youth development, poor family fitness, and lack of family communication and trust. In conclusion, two of the principal reasons why more people spend extra hours at work include the demand for additional income and heavy workload. Therefore, this trend would have detrimental impacts on the employees’ wellbeing and their families. (294 words)
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