BÀI MẪU ĐỀ WRITING TASK 2 TOPIC: ELDERLY CARE OR YOUNG EDUCATION
ĐỀ WRITING TASK 2:
Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Vocab advanced band 7.0-8.0+ dành cho chủ đề này:
the aged = older population = the aged community = the elderly
age pensions scheme: kế hoạch lương hưu
get access to basic amenities: có thể trả tiền cho những nhu cầu thiết yếu
nursing home = retirement home
The social life: cuộc sống được giao lưu với mọi người
feeling isolated and depressed: thấy bị cô lập và cô đơn
providing them a sense of community: cảm thấy được gắn bó quantâmtừ cộng đồng
education reform : cải cách giáo dục
deliver a fairer society : tạo ra một xã hội công bằng hơn
secure the highest standards of education : bảo đảm những tiêu chuẩn giáo dục tốt nhất
overcome challenges : vượt qua được thử thách
a well educated and civilized population : người dân được giáo dục tốt và văn minh
capabilities : khả năng của bản thân
a competent workforce : một nguồn lao động chất lượng
productivity increases : năng suất tăng
average income increases : lương trung bình tăng
BÀI MẪU:
There is no doubt that the national budget should be allocated effectively to address all the pressing problems that the whole society is facing today. While some believe that the government should provide support for the seniors, others argue that education needs to receive more public funding.
On the one hand, it is believed that the aged should receive both financial and social support from the government. With regard to the former, the age pensionsscheme can help the aged community who could no longer earn money get access to basic amenities in life, including accommodation, food and medicalcare. As for the latter, it is increasingly common for the aged now to live all alone without their family around, therefore they should receive proper care and support from nursing homes. The social life and the help of professionals at such places can stop them from feeling isolated and depressed, providing them a sense of community.
On the other hand, others hold the view that taxpayer’s money should be spent more on education reform. If we are to deliver a fairer society, we must securethe highest standards of education for all young people, regardless of theirbackground. Therefore, we need to ensure that young people receive the preparation they need to overcome challengesand succeed. Furthermore, theentire society would benefit significantly from a well-educated and civilizedpopulation. When all students have the opportunity to develop their talents and capabilities, they would become a competent workforce. As a result, productivity increases, average income increases, and unemployment decrease.
In conclusion, although the government must provide age pensions and goodelderly care for the retired/ senior citizens/ retired people, they should also payfor education reform to enable their country to progress.
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