GIẢI ĐỀ WRITING 09/05/2020
GIẢI ĐỀ WRITING 09/05/2020
SAMPLE:
It is increasingly common for scientific research to be paid for and carried out by companies rather than the government. This essay will explain why I believe its positives outweigh the drawbacks of privatization.
Considering firstly the negatives of research conducted by businesses, an important one is the danger of creeping biases into research results. The reason for this is that the basic priority of a private company is its profits rather than public welfare, so it is more than possible that they could conduct less rigorous clinical trials for the benefit of their marketing departments. A pharmaceutical company paying for a study of new depression medication, for example, might influence the study’s design or interpretation in ways that favor the drug that they would like to market. Contrast this with public funding research, which is usually performed under rigorous standards from the government and can be used in the service of human welfare.
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Nevertheless, there are numerous advantages of private research, the most significant of which is its effectiveness. While government-funded research often requires the collaboration of many personnel from different government departments, research funded by private institutions is not bogged down by such sluggish bureaucracy. As a result, this advantage can enable companies to focus more on their research, which can lead to innovations. Furthermore, researching can act as a catalyst for speeding up the growth of an organization by introducing breakthrough products in the market. Consequently, this gives the business a competitive edge over its competitors, thus becoming the leader in that industry.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of efficiency and corporate success that come with scientific research funded by companies outweigh the risk of biases.
(290 words)
Lexical Resources:
– creeping biases into research results: có thể mang lại sự thiên lệch/ sự lệch lạc trong công bố kết quả nghiên cứu
– public welfare: an sinh xã hội
– conduct less rigorous clinical trials: tiến hành các thử nghiệm lâm sàng ít chặt chẽ hơn
– for the benefit of: vì lợi ích của ai
– depression medication: thuốc trị trầm cảm
– influence the study’s design or interpretation: ảnh hưởng đến thiết kế hoặc sự diễn dịch của nghiên cứu.
– in ways that: theo những cách mà
– favor: có lợi hơn cho ai đó
– performed under rigorous standards: tiến hành dưới những tiêu chuẩn nghiêm ngặt hơn
– in the service of human welfare: phục vụ vì phúc lợi công cộng
– collaboration of many personnel from different government departments: sự liên kết giữa các cán bộ từ các cơ quan hành chính nhà nước
– bogged down by such sluggish bureaucracy: bị sa lầy vào bộ máy quan liêu làm ăn chậm chập
– act as a catalyst for: là chất xúc tác cho cái gì
– speeding up the growth: đẩy nhanh quá trình phát triển
– by way of: bằng cách (hay hơn từ “by”)
– gives the business a competitive edge over its competitors: làm cho công ty có một lợi thế cạnh tranh so với đối thủ
