IDEA GỢI Ý CHO PHẦN BODY:
Body 1: Giải thích lí do
– Firstly, it is due to the tough working competition these days
– Secondly, it is believed that we are living in the materialistic and hedonic world nowadays
Body 2: Đưa ra quan điểm
– As people choose to spend more hours in their workplace, it has negatively affected their family and social life. One of the cases is that many parents abandon their children as they are busy working.
– People have a sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy diets due to their busy corporate life. They have little time for exercise or outdoor activities and this is degrading the overall health of people.