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HỌC NGAY TỪ VỰNG LIÊN QUAN ĐẾN CHỦ ĐỀ:
It has always included Ving: việc gì luôn bao gồm làm gì.
the next generation = the young = the youth = individuals = the younger generation = children
In order to: khi chỉ mục đích để làm gì
= so as to = with a view to = with the purpose of = in order that + clause
the individual = almost everyone
respect and obey the rules : respect and follow the common rules
always begins in the home = from home education.
is widely thought = is commonly thought/ believed
achieve = accomplish = complete
as much influence as : dùng đến so sánh bằng
co-operate with each other = collaborate = work side by side = team up
contribute to = make great contribution to
goes on = continue = carry on
BÀI MẪU BAND 9.0 TỪ GIÁM KHẢO TRONG SÁCH CAM:
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
In order to be a good member of any society the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.
However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.
But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.
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GRAMMAR HIGHLIGHTS:
Không thể là từ mỗi việc gì: This cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
Trong văn viết, có thể dung đến các câu hỏi trần thuật bắt đầu bằng “wh-question” hoặc “how”.
Parents will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world. (Câu này áp dụng tốt khi nói về bố mẹ)
This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community.
Khi nói về 1 người ở vế trước, thì vế sau thay vì dung “he/she”, mình có thể viết luôn là “they” để ám chỉ số đông:
Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community.
Sử dụng so sánh bằng:
Teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home.
Đó là 1 việc như thế nào:
It is something that + clause
Câu áp dụng được nhiều:
Trải nghiệm sống và làm việc với nhiều người có hoàn cảnh khác nhau từ 1 xã hội đa dạng hơn:
(At school, children will) experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society.
Mọi người trong xã hội phải có trách nhiệm giúp đỡ người trẻ trở thành những người có ích và năng động trong xã hội:
It is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.
