BÀI MẪU: 

 It is commonly believed that graduates usually leave their nests to look for independent living space, but in some nations, there is a staggering number of youngsters residing with their caretakers. While this trend can bring certain benefits, I believe that they are eclipsed by significant drawbacks.

On the one hand, there are tangible advantages when grown–ups stay in their own homes with their parents. Firstly, their living expenses can be reduced. While other adults have to pay for rents, bills and other necessities, in this case, the costs can be shared between family members. Consequently, young adults can save some money for other purposes such as further study or investment. Secondly, parents can provide immediate mental support for young people amidst their crisis when transitioning from studying to working. Living with parents, youngsters can confide in them and receive sound advice from experienced predecessors.

On the other hand, I opine that there exist detrimental impacts on those who do not live independently. The first disadvantage is that the young can be over-reliant on their family. With the help of parents, the young may not have to do household tasks such as doing laundry or washing up, which can later be huge obstacles when they have to move out. Furthermore, the autonomy and self-efficacy of youngsters can also diminish. Being with overprotective parents can deprive adults of the development of problem-solving and decision-making skills. Compared to other counterparts, they are less confident when choosing between different options.

In conclusion, although young people can receive financial and mental support from family members, it is advisable that they lead a life of independence after finishing studies.

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